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Heavy pants and breaths slipped your lips as you were leaning against the wall right infront of a house. You didn't have time to look at your surroundings yet after you ran so much to make sure that none of them was following you anymore. Thanks to that, in the end you ran more than you could actually take, and on top of that you were still injured and unable to treat your wounds at the moment.. so you were grateful that you could still stand at this point.

It took you a good ten minutes until you finally could start paying attention to the things around you. Somehow the house you were standing right in front of looked very familiar, yet you couldn't figure out why. It somehow had a nice look to it, even though it still looked dark at the same time.

Out of curiosity you decided to go over to it, as well as for the reason of needing a place to hide. Approaching the front door, you tried to feel the door's handle. Strangely enough it wasn't locked at all.

You went inside. The extreme silence felt somewhat uncomfortable as you walked into the living room. It was quite messy. You were still unsure of what this familiar feeling was, but you froze almost instantly when you heard something.. there was movement on the stairs. You turned to look through the door you came through a moment ago, staring into the hallway. You made sure to move as far back as you possibly could, making yourself stand all the way against a table with your behind.

Every step you heard brought a fearsome thought into your mind, yet you couldn't find yourself to look away from the door. Whoever it was, once you assumed it reached the bottom of the stairs you could hear some awkward clicking unevenly from time to time.

"You're back already, West?" You froze when your eyes met a pair of dark purple ones once he stepped through the door, his eyes had this half-emotionless stare in them. His long silver hair was tied in a low ponytail, and he was dressed in some simple shorts and a T-shirt. But now you understood why it sounded awkward, it was because he was walking on bare feet, and one of his legs was fully made of metal as well as one of his arms.

He stared at you for a while. In that time it took you a moment to realize that this guy looked somewhat similar to Gilbert, yet different in a lot of ways. He was actually quiet compared to the Gilbert you knew.

"You're hurt.." You blinked, snapping out of your thoughts as you heard his calm voice. You quickly moved your hand, pressing it against the wound on your arm which made you realize the blood was all across your arm by now.

"Why would you care?" You coldly responded. You kept up an angry look even when he let out a soft sigh. Gilbert attempted to step towards you, which made you take a step back.

"Don't even think of getting near me" You warned. Gilbert simply stopped, as if he wasn't even trying.

"I don't have any intention of hurting you, I don't have a reason for it" Gilbert spoke. He remained on his spot since he could see your doubt. His gaze only averted from a direct look into your eyes to the wound from time to time.

"There's a first aid kit in the kitchen on the top shelf, help yourself if you can handle it then-"

"Yeah right, it's probably some kind of trap" You were quite surprised when Gilbert's expression turned into slight anger after you spoke, as if he was offended.

"You're acting as if I booby trapped it. Why would I do such a thing? I need that thing more than ever since I started taking care of West" Gilbert sighed.

"What? Does he get injured that much?" You didn't realize you spoke out loud until you saw Gilbert shake his head with a shrug.

"Him and getting injured? No, it was for myself actually" You froze at Gilbert's words for a moment. The thought that this Ludwig was possibly violent at his younger years was quite disturbing, taking care of someone like him must have been tough.

For some reason you decided to just trust Gilbert's words for now. You helped yourself into the kitchen in order to search the drawers and cupboards for the first aid kit he told you about. It took you a while, but eventually you found what you needed. Only to have a new problem rise up, since you were unable to wrap the bandage around your arm properly with just one hand.

"Hey Gilbert-" You cut off your own sentence when you realized he was closer to you than you thought. He already went ahead to help you with the bandage before you could even ask. Looking at his facial expression more closely, something seemed to be bothering him.

"Make sure you leave immediately after I'm done, West can come back home any minute now" After Gilbert spoke, only then did you realize that you actually stepped into Ludwig's house.

"How do you even know that I'm being followed by him?" You asked, assuming that he somehow knew about you being chased. Gilbert shrugged, the annoyance in his expression was still clearly there.

"When something like a human trespasses, or anything else unusual comes up he's always involved" Gilbert spoke as he finished tying the bandage. Somehow it looked as if he didn't like it, yet as if he agreed with it partly.

"W-well.. thanks, I guess.." You said. You moved over to the door to take your leave. Gilbert was right as it wasn't safe to stay right there with him, yet you didn't understand why he would help you.

There wasn't a lot of time to think about it as you continued your way down the streets..
Well.. this story is turning out.. intersting? I dunno, but hey like I said this thing is turning out to have quite some parts.

Not sure what to say, I wrote what simply popped up at the time and that's how I continue to write the story slowly xD

I hope you enjoy either way.

Disclaimer: I do not own Hetalia nor any 2P! designs in any way.

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:iconkimiko-mami:
Kimiko-mami Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
this was amazzinn!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!!!!Excited Blush 
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Laxus23 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
You write amazing stories!!! Please update the next chapter! I wonder if Germany is going to come~! Next please
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TheBlackBloodVirus Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Artist
Please send me a link for the next part!!!
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ZEAWSUMPERSON1 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i wanna see wut happens next...Bear Emoji-33 (Sad) [V2] 
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Dustfinger1 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Student Writer
What happens?! What happens?! Where's the next one!?
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ParaTheImp Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
When is the next one?!?! I'm so curious what will happen next! Please! :3
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12popscotch Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
I dont think there will be a next one 
I just looked at the date of when this was posted and it said 2012 ;A;
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ParaTheImp Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw Country Chicken Christ Crackers! I was hoping for more...I well. It was a good story while it lasted right????
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoarplz::iconnaoplz::iconbegplz:
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haleyw413 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I need more nowwwwwwww
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconikrplz:
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haleyw413 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*nose bleeds* hes gonna do something bad i no it
The Monkey With the Nosebleed 
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyousayplz:
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haleyw413 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*insert troll face here* i hope he does Problem? 
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PirateLuv32 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't wait for more please update soon! <3
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cinthiaPatterson Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Its pretty intresting! please continue.
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tweeterstwin Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
MORE! PLEASE!
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homestuckxreaders12 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Please please please!!!!! Get to next one I love it.
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CherryPuppy45 Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
Please continue to write, I enjoyed this very much...
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blue-angel2 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh gooooooob i can wait for the update :D :moarplz: oh please continue!!!! it's so good i could hug you. :3
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hetalialover4eva4515 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
AWESOMENESS!!!!!!:D
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bdolphin15 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i loved it......im just starting to now realize that they are the opposite of what they usually are!!!! thats a really good idea!!!!!! i really cant wait for the next one!!!!
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DarkDreamerRapej Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kewl story, cant wait for the next chapter!
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kirawolfXD Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist
Please hurry, the suspense is killing me!
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AliceLiddell123 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
When do you think you'll be done with the next part, if you don't mind my asking?
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Tygermane Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What a great story! I hope you continue it soon! It would be a shame for such an awesome fic to go unfinished!
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gremilnsinthecrypt Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow .....AWESOME!!!!!
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xxXrosenrotXxx Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Must...be patient...until next part!
So epic!
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1pieceluver Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Well hey, you said you needed some inspiration! Looks like you're on your way!! :D
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Lemmingx3 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yep, doing good aren't I? xD
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1pieceluver Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Yes! :D
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K8tly1n Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
MORE!!!!
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JazminHopkins Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012   Artist
;w; omg when the next part coming in? and your a awesome writer!!!!!
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Lemmingx3 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't really tell when the next part is, I just continue writing when I feel like it lol

And thanks! I really appreciate it that you like my writing :3
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JazminHopkins Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012   Artist
;w; ok cant wait and yw :D
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Aly2840 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
O.O Holy Shit ! I'M IN LUDWIG'S HOUSE ??? OMG , I'm dead -_- ..... ( I'm so luky that Luddy wasn't home/didnt came while i was there x-x)


Awesome :iconsuperw00tplz: !!!!! :iconmoarplz: <--- PLEEEESE !!!
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Lemmingx3 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well yeah.. the weird things that pop up in my mind xD

I believe the first thing I write is usually the best, rather than changing things over and over again lol
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shadowleira Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012   Writer
haha him being quiet should never happen in ANY universe...

but still...

the way you described him would make me think that he was a white-haired edward elric. even though ed's eyes aren't purple.

man i'm gonna get caught if i stay here talking to you aren't i?
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Lemmingx3 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The fact that he has the exact same metal limbs already makes me think he is like Edward Elric. And yeah, the quiet thing wasn't exactly the best way to describe him I guess, I should've posed him more.. angry? xD

I dunno, I don't really have a very clear image of him even though I lurk on a single 2P!Prussia ask blog on tumblr. He's posed a little angry there too x3
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shadowleira Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012   Writer
XD you did a great job of it. i was just sort of took me by surprise for a bit. haha it sort of makes you wonder doesn't it?
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG I WANT MORE SO BAD...

but before i go....


*quick huggles gilbert* I LOVE YOU 2P! PRUSSIA!!!!!!!!!!

*flees*

Gilbert:....whut?
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Lemmingx3 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well.. I kinda wonder what weird things will pop up in order to write the next parts lol
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josie1130 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SAME! XD
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Oh boy.......
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